Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
People often travels to other countries to visit various monuments, explore their culture. It is frequently discussed that traveler from different countries should follow local tradition, However other thinks opposite. we will discuss both the views in forth coming paragraphs.
Firstly, tourist travel to other places to get familiarise with tradition or they are attracted to their customs. Visitor came their to learn there culture, so the best way is to observe their behavior by living close to them. Many people visit India every year because they are attracted towards its culture. for an anecdote renowned actor Leonardo's mother opt Sikhism as she was moved by the beliefs of sikh gurus. So these creed changes various people lives.
Secondly, people coming from different part of the country have different aspect to see their life. So one should br open to the new ideas and respect their guests views and tradition. Moreover we can also learn from the other countries tradition. for instance dowry culture doesn't exist in most of the countries and most of Indian families have orthodox thinking compare to other countries. therefore one should learn about other people views, they treat both men and women equally.
In my opinion, from aforementioned views the advantage of welcoming different culture over weighs that visitor should follow visiting country tradition. Since there is scope of improvement in every aspect of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30434782609 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45070878216 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613043478261 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4868642023 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3333333333 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325753921185 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105559513151 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087546381592 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214083336961 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949487366751 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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