Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is undeniable that sports have increasingly improved their useful contribution to people's lives. While team sports are greatly advocated by some people, there are some arguments of more significant roles of individual sports. In the scope of this essay, the benefits of both sorts of sport would be completely justified.
On the one hand, team sports offer players interpersonal skills development. Playing in a team is attributed to the development of teamwork and communication skills. Team cooperation requires interaction and understanding among team players so that they are assured to take in training tactics. Accordingly, team players will implicitly reinforce their collaboration as well as communication skills. Furthermore, it also contributes to the friendship and solidarity enhancement. The presence of modern social networking inevitably hinders people from face-to-face meetings, hence it would be practically great for girls and guys to seize the opportunity to pour their hearts during playing games. For instance, while playing basketball after various stressful classes, students are able to chat with each other and share their stories, which is an effective way to ease their learning pressures.
On the other hand, playing sports individually is beneficial to maturity of personal competencies such as temper management and self-independence. Players who are engaged in individual sports such as swimming, taekwondo and karate are inevitably prone to loneliness and desperation and they have to get through them without much others' help, which gradually trains them to become stronger and more durable. Additionally, those who take part in individual sports are more flexible in setting up their own schedules, which are not dependent on other members. They are allowed to make their appointments at their convenience without taking teammates' plans into account.
In conclusion, the two sport kinds offer certain merits to players. While interpersonal skill improvements are subject to group sports, personal competencies developments are regarded as significant outcomes of individual sports. I personally believe that no matter what advantages, players should take up a sport in accordance with their own preferences and passions so that they can get the results with flying colors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70520231214 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15973553183 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592485549133 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3492767404 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.117647059 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225676179518 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681887192104 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569261129253 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140705360119 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516827888871 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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