1. Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
With the rapid development of globalization, tourism has been considered to be one of the fastest growing industries in the world. However, its impact on culture is a matter of considerable controversy at present. This essay will elaborate on both positive and negative effects of tourism from a cultural perspective.
On the one hand, there are positive contributions from tourism industries to protect and develop a culture. Firstly, tourism benefits to the opportunity for cultural exchange that it offers. Tourism brings people together from different backgrounds, cultures, and traditions. When tourists visit a place, they will study about the history, discover specialties and especially enjoy sightseeing. This helps to increase an awareness of indigenous culture which otherwise would become extinct. Therefore, culture can be protected and passed on to the younger generations. Secondly, tourism also attracts investment from multinational companies, and the collected money can use to improve facilities, promote the active preservation and protection of important local resources.
On the other hand, there is also a strong argument that tourism is destroying culture for profit. The over-development of some areas can damage authentic cultural value. There are many exotic or picturesque places that can be dramatically damaged by the action of tourists. The intrusion of outsiders in the area may also disturb the local culture and create unrest among the people. In addition, the impact of tourism may destroy the life of local people. Some people may enter into criminal activities to fetch easy money from tourists, which leads to increased crime and anti-social activities and loss of moral and religious values.
In conclusion, although the existence of tourism has a great contribution on preserving culture, it is undeniable that it has put the integrity of a culture at risk
- 1.Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. 73
- 1.Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53608247423 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08233439135 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.396223187 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7647058824 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268555721352 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856720605161 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454864216925 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162046507418 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397145686052 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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