You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately because of a previous appointment you cannot come at the time they wish.
Write a letter to the admissions tutor and explain your position. Apologies and offer to come on another day or later the same day. Ask also how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.
Dear Mr. Thomas
This is to tell you that I will not able to attend the interview scheduled on Monday 20th March 2019 at your university branch in Macon Georgia.
Though you sent the interview invite letter in the due time. However, I had already booked an appointment with the eye specialist on the same day.
I have a minor eye surgery, And I anticipate that this could result in pain, Further more my eyes would be covered with bandage for few hours .Under such situation this would affect my interview performance.
My profound apologies for conveniences that might be causing . However I don’t want to lose this opportunity and hence suggest you to kindly re-schedule the interview at 3.00 PM on the same day or someday in the next week .
And with reference to your previous letter, I would appreciate if you could provide the duration of interview and if I have to take any written test ?? Please let me know so that I can plan my schedule .
Looking forward to hearing from .
Yours faithfully .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...our university branch in Macon Georgia. Though you sent the interview invite letter in...
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Line 6, column 142, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ld be covered with bandage for few hours .Under such situation this would affect m...
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Line 6, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Under
... be covered with bandage for few hours .Under such situation this would affect my int...
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Line 8, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s for conveniences that might be causing . However I don't want to lose this ...
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Line 8, column 64, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...or conveniences that might be causing . However I don't want to lose this opportun...
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Line 8, column 227, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...the same day or someday in the next week . And with reference to your previous ...
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Line 10, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t me know so that I can plan my schedule . Looking forward to hearing from . ...
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Line 12, column 32, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ule . Looking forward to hearing from . Yours faithfully .
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Line 14, column 17, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rd to hearing from . Yours faithfully .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, so, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62855672751 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5495803343 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2222222222 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224861767216 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870342596759 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719664200385 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104541175048 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646880604409 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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