In many cities crime is increasing. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce crime levels?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Crime acts as a major hurdle, which hampers the growth of any nation as well as deem as a stigma which tarnish image of any society. Crime is the result of many intractable things, but it can be mitigated by various effective ways. Therefore, I am going to shed my views over the requirement of these statements.
To begin with, everyone wants prosperity and success but due to certain unavoidable circumstances, one compels to commit crime due to multifarious reasons. Firstly, in this competitive era, everyone aspires for success in short span without hard work, thus when one does not get success then, ultimately cultivation of negative thoughts begin, thereby one gets envy and jealousy for others on account of which, crime happens. Secondly, many people often come under the trap of various fatal intoxications, which make people to loose their senses, hence make someone to be a part of crime. For instance, it has been found that drugs, intoxication and desire for lavish life make youngsters to do crime because they are not patient enough for success.
However, every problem comes with solution, which is similar in this case. Furthermore, proper initiatives at right time can make people to not indulge in any crime and government can play a dramatic role for declining crime in a manifold ways. Firstly, government should create opportunities for the people so that they could not get sense of demotivation and frustration, thereby people will be able to engage themselves in doing work and can have proper path for their success. Secondly, government should aware people regarding the dire consequences of doing crime as a result people can easily be able to differentiate between wrong and right.
In conclusion, I opine one needs to change his/her mindset because alone government can not do anything.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, in short, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17957746479 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78428965718 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2504272026 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.071428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8571428571 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228378754401 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862132231564 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05054257509 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13375830646 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038521936663 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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