A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. old fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In society, these days, there is a continuous chase for money and fame, or different said, for a better social status. People are blinded by these facts and higher numbers of individuals are starting to forget what really matters. This type of omnious behaviour is a real threat for old-fashioned qualities, like kindness, trust, respect and honour, whisch I believe are slowly becoming obsolete.
There is no question that, nowadays, rich or famous people are far better seen, even if they don't know what respect is, than people who work hard to achieve something. One of the mai problems is that respect towards rich people has increased considerably over the last few years, so, the more eanrings you have, the more respected you will be. As a matter of fact, whealthy people who sustain their society through charitable actions are receieving a lot more admiration and respect, rather than someone who, as an example, made a few weeks or months of volunteer work at a special centre. Kindness actions which are more shameless are the ones which are made like an obligation or a demonstration of good intentions through your high income to society just to be observed and adulated by people.
On the other hand there are so many famous people who are trying to help and improve some issues in our society, by doing it from personal initiative, from heart. I firmly believe that this kind of people should be honoured and respected because they aren't looking for fame and they don't want to embarass someone else with their actions. Fame and influence should be used to gather support for causes, not to send to oblivion values like respect and honour through people.
As a conclusion, moral values like generosity and kindness aren't treated as they should, nowadays, by people, because personal goods and social status are far more important.
- A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. old fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 73
- The ease of international travel and the spread of various kind of mass media all over the world have made it more possible than ever for people to know how other people live in other countries. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages ? 73
- 1. As greater numbers of people move to cities and as cities expand in size, city life loses its appeal.2. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. old fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 89
- 1 As greater numbers of people move to cities and as cities expand in size city life loses its appeal 2 To what extent do you agree or disagree 91
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, kind of, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92948717949 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49301291858 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592948717949 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.2048807266 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.818181818 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3636363636 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132425421427 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530705065113 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331690054844 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895129162522 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023611761647 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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