Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of
violence increase. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Without justice crime increase in any society.Capital punishment almost ruling out from world as a consequences lives become invaluable and crimes of violence enhanced. Death penalty is compulsory to control violence in society.In this essay we will discuss that punishment is extremely important for reinforcement of law and order situation with that society become animal world off being powerful is only way of survival.
Although many countries and nation consider capital punishment as violation of humans rights so because they rule out this law.Perhaps,they consider punishment effect their family life.the country like america ,UK,Canada use this law for their own purpose the people want to punish or revenge.Many argued that some people are not suspect and get them punishment is not fair way.
On the other hand i strongly favor the point for lawful enforcement punishment is mandatory. Perhaps many criminal whose don't get any kind of punishment become brave of their act.When courts become unable to give justice to people create restless condition.Recent survey shows that many serial killer created by injustice and not giving punishment. An incident happen in our village where a person murdered his cousin in front of his brother and sister but know he has released from jail and live a normal life with his family.on the other side victim family living in compulsory situation. Although,Jails becomes cover for criminal from any crime and organised them for other.Criminal is criminal no justification should be made in favor of crime because it led to miserable condition of people whose lives are not secure and poor-law and order condition.due to violence of rule because of not giving punishment to criminals.
In this essay we discussed the in favor of strong approval in giving capital punishment to criminal according to the charge.In Islam our Prophet (S.A.W) said that killing one person is like killing whole humanity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32467532468 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9050514046 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594155844156 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.1641810689 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 205.0 106.682146367 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.5 20.7667163134 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246222436582 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113950824361 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648783998393 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160826502766 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695572387542 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 13.0946893788 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.