You work for a company, you need to take some time off and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
• Explain why you want to take some time off work
• Give details of the amount of time you need
• Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear Sir,
I am writing to request you to approve my leave for a week as I am planning to go on a vacation. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate last year has been very busy for me as I have been involved in the design and implementation of some critical projects additionally I have also been constantly travelling to customer locations. These activities have not only taken a toll on my health but also made my mind dull therefore I plan to go a vacation along with my family to some exotic place. This will not only give me a much-desired break but will be a great opportunity to rejuvenate my mind.
Although my earlier plan was to go on holiday for two weeks however the plan later on changed to a week. Hence I will be on leave from Friday till Thursday next week. Meanwhile, Ana will be taking over in my absence as I have briefed her about the projects which I was handling. In case anything urgent comes up I will be reachable on what’s app or Viber.
I look forward to your approval
Yours sincerely
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to request you to approve m...
^^^
Line 6, column 106, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...er the plan later on changed to a week. Hence I will be on leave from Friday till Thu...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, look, so, therefore, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40625 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66973700198 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619791666667 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6483635178 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0951224741676 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412141140793 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387995318827 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677054432213 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364847413236 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.