You are due to start an English language course next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to the manager of the language school, Sally Flannigan. In your letter:
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/her when you think you can start.
Dear Sally,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this epistle to inform you that I will not be able to attend the English language course next week due to some official commitments. Let me elucidate in detail.
As you are aware I was looking forward to join this course as it was an ideal opportunity to improve my speaking and writing skills since I have to present plethora of case studies and additionally speak in public forums regularly but unfortunately I have to travel to Korea for an important business meeting. The meeting involves presenting technical design of a new software product which I have been working on for months. Although I tried to postpone the travel but unfortunately no one in my team can present it so I have to travel immediately. Hence due to my official commitments I will not be able to join the English classes by next week.
Since the business trip to Korea will be for a few weeks therefore I will only be able to join the course by the end of April. Hence I request you to align me accordingly in a new batch.
I hope you will give my suggestion a due consideration.
Yours sincerely
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sally, Hope you are doing well. I am writing th...
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Line 4, column 40, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to joining'.
Suggestion: to joining
... As you are aware I was looking forward to join this course as it was an ideal opportun...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 551, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ent it so I have to travel immediately. Hence due to my official commitments I will n...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 128, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...to join the course by the end of April. Hence I request you to align me accordingly i...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ue consideration. Yours sincerely Said
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, hence, look, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56796116505 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75805489634 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558252427184 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.6030373436 44.8134815571 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5454545455 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300061372381 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110749824303 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836976657761 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184534421888 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653667913521 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.