In some countries, small town-centre shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars. Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
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Today, in some part of the world, with the dramatic growth in the number of large out-of-town stores has threatened the business of small town-centre shops. In my opinion, although this brings some certain drawbacks, it is more of a positive change than a negative one. On the one hand, the mushroom rise of shopping complexes in the outskirts is conducive to the economy and the cities as a whole. The first benefit is that the suburb land is wider, the cost of renting and operation there are much cheaper than in the city. This means that parking spaces are always available and many large shopping malls will be built to offer people various choices with a huge of brands but the prices are reasonable. For that reason, those out-of-town stores are attractive to a wider range of people. Thus, the demand for moving from urban areas to the suburbs and owning private cars will increase significantly. that can foster the growth of both the suburban economy and the automobile industry. Second, those stores which appear nearer to the neighbouring villages can make a considerable contribution to ease urban traffic volume and demand for migrating to the large cities of citizens. On the other hand, some drawbacks of this development should be taken into account. The rise in the traffic volume means the more exhaust fumes are released into the air. This makes air pollution become worse day by day. As a result, the worse air pollution becomes, the more diseases about the breathing people catch. In addition, this change might create traffic congestion at the edge of the city, especially on the weekends. In conclusion, although there are some disadvantages of out-of-town stores development, this change should be considered as a positive one because it encourages suburban economic development and eases the burden of the city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42679127726 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58029998138 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532710280374 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6900343976 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.133333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152580499254 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539939495152 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778521103369 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112269504852 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804669684545 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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