It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. punishment is necessary to help them to learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children.
Human behaviour is designed in such a way that if it is guided for thoughtful actions then it produces results that are productive,meaningful and benevolent to the society and opposite is the case if it is not guided for right actions then the thoughtless action results in spoiling the humanity and sometimes nature as well.
I agree that the difference between right and wrong should taught by parents and teachers .An early age,children learn so many things from their home and school as well. Proper education gives right direction to the children. If a child does some wrong things,then it is a duty of parents to tell him that it is wrong and it creates problem for him.It should not necessary to give punishment at all the time. By doing this,child cannot make the difference between right and wrong. sometimes,mental growth of child is suffered. Child wants to know about everything because of his curiosity. At that time,questions should be explained by parents with their negative and positive effect. In this way,children understand all the things judiciously.
Government also gave strict instructions to schools against punishment. Teachers did not allow to give any kind of punishment. Sometimes parents and teachers give punishment to children for their better but in that case punishment should not be hard.By giving hard punishment creates bad impact on children 's growth and development .
This matter requires deep thinking and inclusiveness of both parents and teachers because children spend lots of their time with parents and teachers. sometimes,by giving the chains of restrictions and punishment to children,can develop an inferiority complex among them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32958801498 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10105607591 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.1722166353 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.642857143 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315010835266 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991194271988 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864295339041 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165571338216 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106226509767 0.056905535591 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.