Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it must be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that people contend that economic development is the only solution to stop hunger and poverty. Others, however, argue for an end to economic growth in order to conserve our environment. I agree completely with the first view.
On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why many people believe that economic development is affecting the habitat severely. Firstly, the effects of global warming are environmental and social changes that are caused by people from industrialization and greenhouse effect. If this phenomenon keeps continues, it will lead to sea level rise and change the weather, then humans may face an ecological crisis which impact our own survival. Secondly, a large amount of emissions from factories has definitely been created from humans causing dumping of garbage daily into the sea. Thus,the ecosystems of our ocean will be altered, and this may affect marine animals badly. Protecting them means protecting the habitat in which they live in.
On the other hand, i believe that due to the economic growth, we can face many challenges and deal with them. The first reason is that the more developing of economic, the more advanced of technology become. For example, The UK, USA, Canada and Norway are leading the world in developing energy from ocean waves and tides. We can easily use electricity from this energy source. However, in order to invest in it, the government needs a solid financial source, and it certainly can solve part of the problem of climate change. Furthermore, if the economy becomes solid, the government can establish into centers that support people in difficult circumstances. Only the growth of economies will provide the poor with the wealth to afford the basic necessities of life. For instance, Korea, which is a strong economic power, had to implement social policy reforms to benefit more people, such as the labor insurance program, including unemployment benefits and extended training plans for beneficiaries.
In conclusion,although the growth of economies of developing country are affecting positively and negatively, it seems to me that it will bring more advantage for our world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22636103152 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85709992966 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58452722063 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7244305873 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27777777778 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141199479111 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465652308052 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586992215461 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10139439083 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791409265181 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.