The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The charts below illustrate the consumption of water used for some different business namely industrial, agricultural, domestic use in six area all over the world. It can be clearly seen from the charts that agricultural need much water than the others.
According to the charts, in North America and Europe the percentage of water use account for approximately 50 percent while the proportion of domestic water use stood at about 15 percent each areas. In addition, North America ‘s water use consumption is 39 percent and this figure is 7 percent higher in comparison with Europe ‘s percentage.
Meanwhile, in south america, africa, central asia and South East asia, the proportion of water use for agricultural in each area are largest in 3 purposes.As can be seen from the charts, the consumption of water use for each area are between just over 70 percent to just under 90 percent whereas the percentage of industrial and domestic use in africa, central asia and south east asia are both under 20%. By contrast industrial and domestic water proportion use in south america is over 1.5 time as low as agricultural use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02645502646 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78027098994 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497354497354 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.903541673 43.030603864 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.333333333 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338564264314 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185458759315 0.103423049105 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1298172998 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253235227156 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111383598554 0.0819641961636 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.2329268293 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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