Prevention is better than cure ,researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in prevention measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is irrefutable fact that prevent from many disease is better idea according to some proponents.However, some people believe that research and care for maladies people which is excellent to curb this issue. In my opinion, I strongly uplift the conviction that many disease require a lot of research and treatment rather than advanced precautions.
To begin with, in contemporary era,people asserted deeply study on some disease and then according to result, doctor can treat their patients. It is evident that not only prevention is aid to reduce acute disease.However, analysis of such a harmful ailments and medical cure is almost equally pivotal for mankind. If a person is already suffering from disease then doctor have only one option to choose how to prevent from danger while treatment ,the only one way they know prevention step when they rearch that which medicine require more. Example can be seen in polio which is highly spread among the people while 20's century, owning to many research about polio and eventually, they got remedies for that, in current time polio is disappear by vaccines.
On the other hand,prevention is better than cure is rightly said which means that we should also take necessary steps to prevent this disease. Furthermore, some disease progress to other people using various medium and as a result it is really hard to step them.Apart from this, by preventing diseases, we can save people from severe experience of this disease.
In conclusion, medical Research on disease and preventing them to occur, both have equal importance and we should equally focus on both areas to make lives healthier and enjoyable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disease seems to be countable; consider using: 'many diseases'.
Suggestion: many diseases
...t is irrefutable fact that prevent from many disease is better idea according to some propon...
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Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...etter idea according to some proponents.However, some people believe that research and ...
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Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun disease seems to be countable; consider using: 'many diseases'.
Suggestion: many diseases
..., I strongly uplift the conviction that many disease require a lot of research and treatment...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
...s. To begin with, in contemporary era,people asserted deeply study on some disease a...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...evention is aid to reduce acute disease.However, analysis of such a harmful ailments an...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...w to prevent from danger while treatment ,the only one way they know prevention st...
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Line 3, column 640, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much research', 'a good deal of research'.
Suggestion: much research; a good deal of research
...the people while 20s century, owning to many research about polio and eventually, they got re...
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Line 3, column 735, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disappeared'.
Suggestion: disappeared
...dies for that, in current time polio is disappear by vaccines. On the other hand,preve...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , prevention
...appear by vaccines. On the other hand,prevention is better than cure is rightly said whi...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Apart
...a result it is really hard to step them.Apart from this, by preventing diseases, we c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, really, so, then, while, apart from, as to, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15185185185 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78081068994 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581481481481 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.6543798628 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.555555556 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.7777777778 7.06120827912 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202868815229 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891588648776 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049803119689 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125761292912 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027445714397 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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