The internet has transform the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problem that did not exist before. What are serious problem associated with internet. What are the best way to solve it.
Eversince the emergence of Internet as an information finding tool, the world has undergone a great transformation. Gone are the days when use of Internet was safe and have produce less trouble, however, nowadays, issues which are being created by using internet are increasing day by day. This essay will discuss the problems, which are created by internet and also gives some remedies how to combat with this serious trouble.
One predominant issue, which is created by internet, is lack of security. In other words, our information may be stolen by some malicious users, and they can use our personal information in a wrong way. For instance, some people should not share their personal information and data to someone, but hackers can hack their data by using some tricks of Internet. Due to this, person may suffer from big problems in terms of mental disturbance. As a result of this, crime may be inclined and people can harm to each other.
In order to tackle this problem, there is need to address the problem at the root. One effective way out is encryption should be used for saving personal data. Owing to this, malicious can not leak out anyone's data, who use code for saving their material. Second remedy is government should make stringent legislation against those people who hack someone's data. By doing this , hackers may feel hesitation before doing this. Consequently, crime rate may decrease.
In conclusion, although, scarcity of security is a deep rooted problem, which is rising due to using internet by criminals, which can be fixed by working shoulder to shoulder on the part of government by using hacking privacy software.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
... undergone a great transformation. Gone are the days when use of Internet was safe ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w to combat with this serious trouble. One predominant issue, which is created ...
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Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a wrong way" with adverb for "wrong"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...d they can use our personal information in a wrong way. For instance, some people should not s...
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Line 5, column 349, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'someones'' or 'someone's'?
Suggestion: someones'; someone's
...gislation against those people who hack someones data. By doing this , hackers may feel ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...le who hack someones data. By doing this , hackers may feel hesitation before doin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, may, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01086956522 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63775176311 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8506112779 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17163496051 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596894085387 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472699178238 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106874842584 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445102322422 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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