Art is considered as an essential part of the cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.
Why do you think that is?
What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?
Globally every society has a unique style of arts which resembles their culture. Though arts are considered as an important part of the culture, not much people are interested in that. Rather, people are more inclined towards science, technology and business. this essay will discuss about the reasons of losing interest in arts and provide necessary actions to be implemented in order to encourage arts.
Because the present generation was concentrating more on their financial development, they hardly find time for arts. parents and teachers are the two main culpricts for this scenario. As the mothers and fathers are only bothered about the choice of career and the pacakage they get in the job, children are often misguided that arts are of no use to them. For instance, although a eight year old boy is super fantastic story teller, his father always wanted him to become a doctor. The eduactors in the schools are giving least priority in the arts. Eventhogh many students have an immense talent in paintaing, they were almost ignored while giving the scores. hence, with the continuous discourgament from both the parents and school masters, there are very few artists available.
schools and government has to take few initaitives to curb the lack of availability of skilled people. schools has to incorporate the arts subject into academic curriculum which encourages parents to support the talented children in arts. For instance, the education institutions should introduce awrding system for the winner in arts examination, which will motivate them. Not only the schools but also the government should take measures to create art based careers. If the governmet jobs are having a weightage criteria of 30% to arts, many people gets attracted towards arts. hence, with the aforementioned factors, it is expected that the number of people interested in arts will increase in the future.
The present essay dicussed about the reasons, why there are fewer artists in the world? And the measures to be enforced to reverese the above scenario.
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- Art is considered as an essential part of the cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.Why do you think that is?What could be done to encourage more p 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, while, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18918918919 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65831416536 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57957957958 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7223792408 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.9473684211 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73684210526 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192438454899 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573487761028 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562773918827 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127342151883 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763374845555 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.