Several nations are eager to host global sporting event ,whereas other countries tend to believe it causes more problems than benefits.I reckon, organizing any international sport event brings tremendous opportunities to concern nations ,meanwhile it has certain drawbacks too which is demonstrated at this essay.
International Sporting events has numerous merits for the betterment of any country.Incomes and Revenues from tourist,media,television,sports team and sponsors which considerate huge amount of economic development for a period of time in a country.Secondly,people from all over the world comes at a particular place.They can share their ideas,views,get along with local culture and get involve in various activities in a host country.For example Fifa world cup in Russia brings huge numbers of people from respective participating countries to boom their economic position for two months.This type of functions creates employment opportunities,Tourism development,Exchange of culture which is substantial for any country.So,these countries should act promptly for the efficient organization of events like this using many volunteers.
However, it possesses some demerits too.Government tend to spend all their expenditure in these events ignoring the public interest and basic necessities.This will demoralize the people of the respective nations and get involve in protest for there rights.To illustrate,in Brazil, government uses all the money in the services of 32 nations depriving there own people preference in 2014.Fights between opposing nations fans are also on the cards at venues.These types of factor induces some people to say International sport events have several negative consequences than benefits.
To conclude, Global sport events should be organize and plan well to minimize negativity.Government can play fundamental role to initiate and events,similarly also look out for the rights of there own people investing on basic facilities and infrastructure.Countries tend to earn huge amount of revenues which can be use for there sole motives.These kinds of events should be conduct on regular basis in each nations on the Globe.
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- Several nations are eager to host global sporting event ,whereas other countries tend to believe it causes more problems than benefits.I reckon, organizing any international sport event brings tremendous opportunities to concern nations ,meanwhile it has 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, second, secondly, similarly, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91078066914 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.17782344755 2.80592935109 149% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609665427509 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 89.0 20.2975951904 438% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 166.305608912 49.4020404114 337% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 530.0 106.682146367 497% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 89.6666666667 20.7667163134 432% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.0 7.06120827912 354% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217705584349 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150215097274 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278371454913 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150215097274 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278371454913 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 51.2 13.0946893788 391% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -35.78 50.2224549098 -71% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.44779559118 273% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 40.4 11.3001002004 358% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.18 12.4159519038 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.33 8.58950901804 155% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 66.0 9.78957915832 674% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 37.6 10.1190380762 372% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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