The proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend has a positive and negative impact on society.
undeniably, it is true that percentage of aged people is constantly rising around the globe. Though, older generation own the experience and skills that they can share with the youngsters. Apart from this, there are certain bad effects on society.
Pitching in the first area of discussion, elders tend to have the necessary knowledge and skills which can help the youngsters in choosing the right path. Similarly, young generation have someone as their inspiration and they might be wanting them to become their mentor. We can see this when younger one's guide or motivation is from the same family like, grandfather or grandmother. Likewise, older people are capable of leaving a positive impact on the minds of youngsters.
On the other hand, there are quite negative impact on society. Firstly, as more and more senior citizens are appointed as a member of staff, the newly graduated students are remained unemployed due to less number of job opportunities. In addition to this, most of the companies first give preference to the senior most candidates for the job in contrast of young, yet talented candidates. The sole reason behind this is experience. Secondly, as large amount of older people are appointed as employee, their retirement age limit is also increasing gradually. For instance, many institutions may have some professors whose age is above the retirement limit, but still they are working leading to few number of pensioners.
To warp up, it can be said that employment of older people in working sector is on rose, but they have the necessary experience and skills to motivate the young generation
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, likewise, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, apart from, for instance, in addition, in contrast, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11278195489 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7791491643 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582706766917 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7111055539 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6428571429 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182014981199 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702772054375 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745616721178 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10633624477 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213226074169 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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