The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries.
Given is the graph illustrating the common issues that people who decide to reside overseas are exposed to.
It is clear from the chart that most of people aged 35-54 are struggling to get healthcare straightened out. By contrast, seeking a school for offspring of the older age group is the category receiving the least expenditure.
To embark on, organizing concrete finance is the most urgent problem of people at the age between 35 and 54, at 35%, while the percentage of people who are 18 to 34 years old and over 55 years olds are slightly lower, at 34% and 29% respectively. Meanwhile, one of the general concerns when inhabiting in other nations is the healthcare problem. To be specific, people in the 35-54 group is highest, at about 37% compared to the lesser of 34% and 32% received by people over 55 and people aged 18-34.
In terms of searching out a local school for youngsters, 19% of 35-54-year-old people, which is significantly higher than people who are 18-34 (6%). However, the figure for this type occurring in over-55-year-olds makes up the smallest proportion, at only 1,5%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
... to. It is clear from the chart that most of people aged 35-54 are struggling to get health...
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Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... at 35%, while the percentage of people who are 18 to 34 years old and over 55 years ol...
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ich is significantly higher than people who are 18-34 6%. However, the figure for this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86243386243 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89456194339 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5652005373 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.875 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120687777503 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590346516048 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489684120194 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0637673249887 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446812735873 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.