Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the advent of the Information Age, the era of Science and Technology has bestowed man with so many liberating innovations and inventions which have broadened the horizons of man in all areas and domains of learning and progress. The 21st century has blessed people from all age groups to be better informed, more independent and free-er to make their choices.
Speaking of the past generations, people were not so openly accessible to so many opportunities. The previous generations were much more limited in their choices. The young people were not allowed to do so many things that they are allowed to do today. The young people couldn't study, going to college was a previlege destined for only a selected lot. There was not too many employment options for the youth. The young people were not allowed to travel the world. They couldn't live independently, inotherwords
they were not allowed to live life on their own terms.
With the New World Order, the world has gone through an altogether global revolution. There is democracy, right to vote, freedom to live independently, freedom to drive, marry who you want to, lots of employment options. Collectively, a young person is much more free-er to follow his passions these days.
There are young people in all impactful domains and areas of expertise.
Wether its Science, Technology, Arts, Healthcare and all other walks of life the young people are making formidable advancements and achievemenrts. Today there are so many organizations and societies which are formed on the basis of relentless efforts of youth. Young people today are making history. There are child prodigies in almost all fields of Science.
The young people are running marathons for important peacful motives.
They are so much more liberated, motivated, passionate and energetic.
Moreover, today they are so headstrong and self -governing, that they can even support other beings as well. They are excelling in politics, law and order, making important amendments and improvements by voicing there opinions through social media, by coming on the roads, doing strikes, raising awareness. There are numerous platforms through which they can take actions and make authorities impose changes. There are names like, Malala yousafzai, Emma watson, Fatima bhutto, Jake barnett, and so many more who have impresse the world with their remarkable work.
In a summation, i would strongly agree with the statement that young people today are much more decisive and free as compared to previous generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, speaking of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2144.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26781326781 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75220689061 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520884520885 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1521487402 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9583333333 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.45833333333 5.45110844103 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.53405017921 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310750068239 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939312156563 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793772597072 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132090507538 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676132898565 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.