government shiuld spend money on railways than roadso what extend do you agree or disagree

Sentence: Fast and safe transportion station system has been improved for development of nation and it is irrefutable to say that administration should spend money on Railways system than roads while roads are always appropriate for individuals.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: RefeGrammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... important for developing of the country ,but I give more preference to improvemen...
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Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...el one place to another at very low cost , it provide food service, and also done ...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provides'?
Suggestion: provides
... place to another at very low cost , it provide food service, and also done their way w...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...also done their way with comfront zone. Moreover there is a less Environment Degradation...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ion using Railways when people use roads ,there is a high wastage of fuels and als...
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Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... also it leads to pollution due to which ,it bad effect on atmosphere.Hence govern...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hence
...e to which ,it bad effect on atmosphere.Hence government should keep an eye on improv...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...e to which ,it bad effect on atmosphere.Hence government should keep an eye on improv...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nt of railway system. Apart from this ,if the people travel by road, it will cr...
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Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...eople will lose their life. Additionally ,rails are much more safe and scuare.Besi...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Besides
...ly ,rails are much more safe and scuare.Besides this , rail system is time consuming mo...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e much more safe and scuare.Besides this , rail system is time consuming mode as o...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ostly people stuck in traffic conjuction .Therefore, government should spend money...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...tly people stuck in traffic conjuction .Therefore, government should spend money on the R...
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Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...at benificial to reach their destination . So roads are also require.Not only this...
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Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...h their destination . So roads are also require.Not only this but also , if the regims ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Not
...destination . So roads are also require.Not only this but also , if the regims cons...
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Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... are also require.Not only this but also , if the regims construct the roads then ...
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Line 7, column 287, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'constructs'?
Suggestion: constructs
... the regims construct the roads then it construct with the nominal charges but create a r...
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Line 7, column 371, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e a railway line has more exhorbitant so government ought to improve the road sys...
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'restrict'
Suggestion: restrict
...he road system To conclude, I would restricted that railways are the less expensive an...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ess expensive and emmit less pollution. However roads are also good to reach their dest...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...are also good to reach their destination .Henceforthly, government should expend m...
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Line 9, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Henceforthly
...e also good to reach their destination .Henceforthly, government should expend more funds on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08910891089 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82424136212 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557755775578 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4196331009 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.333333333 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6666666667 20.7667163134 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.77777777778 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11593087162 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548477704475 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038849069703 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728409442546 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218881119876 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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r to Railways and system

Sentence: The farmers factor to note is that Railway system help to travel one place to another at very low cost , it provide food service, and also done their way with comfront zone.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to farmers and factor
Description: The fragment system help to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace help with verb, past tense
Description: The fragment it provide food is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace provide with verb, past tense

Sentence: Moreover there is a less Environment Degradation using Railways when people use roads ,there is a high wastage of fuels and also it leads to pollution due to which ,it bad effect on atmosphere.Hence government should keep an eye on improvement of railway system.
Description: The fragment . Hence government is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace Hence with adjective
Description: The word due is not usually used as a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to due
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to it and bad

Sentence: Additionally ,rails are much more safe and scuare.Besides this , rail system is time consuming mode as on the road there is a number of traffic and mostly people stuck in traffic conjuction .Therefore, government should spend money on the Railways system.
Description: The fragment and mostly people is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace mostly with adjective
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to Railways and system

Sentence: So roads are also require.Not only this but also , if the regims construct the roads then it construct with the nominal charges but create a railway line has more exhorbitant so government ought to improve the road system
Description: The fragment it construct with is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace construct with verb, past tense
Description: A noun, singular, common is not usually followed by an End of sentence
Suggestion: Refer to system

Sentence: To conclude, I would restricted that railways are the less expensive and emmit less pollution.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to would and restricted

Sentence: Fast and safe transportion station system has been improved for development of nation and it is irrefutable to say that administration should spend money on Railways system than roads while roads are always appropriate for individuals.
Error: transportion Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: The farmers factor to note is that Railway system help to travel one place to another at very low cost , it provide food service, and also done their way with comfront zone.
Error: comfront Suggestion: confront

Sentence: Moreover there is a less Environment Degradation using Railways when people use roads ,there is a high wastage of fuels and also it leads to pollution due to which ,it bad effect on atmosphere.Hence government should keep an eye on improvement of railway system.
Error: wastage Suggestion: waste

Sentence: Additionally ,rails are much more safe and scuare.Besides this , rail system is time consuming mode as on the road there is a number of traffic and mostly people stuck in traffic conjuction .Therefore, government should spend money on the Railways system.
Error: conjuction Suggestion: conduction
Error: scuare Suggestion: square

Sentence: However, there is another school of thought according to which roads are essential for masses because roads are attached with village or small town that benificial to reach their destination .
Error: benificial Suggestion: beneficial

Sentence: So roads are also require.Not only this but also , if the regims construct the roads then it construct with the nominal charges but create a railway line has more exhorbitant so government ought to improve the road system
Error: regims Suggestion: regime
Error: exhorbitant Suggestion: exorbitant

Sentence: To conclude, I would restricted that railways are the less expensive and emmit less pollution.
Error: emmit Suggestion: emit

flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 12 2

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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 12 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 306 350
No. of Characters: 1498 1500
No. of Different Words: 166 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.182 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.895 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.616 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 103 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 72 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 30.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.436 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.9 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.41 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.726 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.052 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5