Sports is one of most popular draws on television today. Some people argue that the practice of showing sport on television is to blame for the poor health of the young generation by encouraging them to watch rather than partake in physical activity.
To what extent do you agree with this view.
Certainly, it is true that from many popular events, sports is one of the most prestigious event on television till date. Some people believe that the broadcast of sporting event on electronic media is to be considered as central factor for influencing the young generation to watch television rather than taking part in it. I disagree with the statement and from my point of view, there are other factors behind this issue.
Pitching in the first area of discussion, watching sports event on television is one of the main reasons that has positive impact over the young generation. To begin with, these events motivates the children and teenagers to partake in outdoor activity which, consequently be resulting in mentally strong and physically fit young generation. Secondly, many children have their role models from sports like cricket. For example, many cricketers ,say Sachin tendulkar, Kapil dev, Dhoni and many more cricketers around the world might be someone's role model. Young players definitely encourages by witnessing their role model playing. In the same content, young generation also obtains motivation for partaking in sports activity( physical activity).
Moving ahead, there are several other reasons that result in poor health of young generation. Initially, lack of balanced diet is one of the major causes that can decrease the health standards of young generation. We can see this when children starts to eat junk food. Eating these types of food is okay, once a month, but many children are there who eats the junk food on daily basis that make them obese and enhances the risk of high cholesterol level in children. Secondly, lack of exercise is another factor behind poor health. There are many teenagers who are indulged in virtual games, like players unknown battle grounds ( pubg). Similarly, they play this type of game on regular basis for longer duration which result in bad posture, depleted level of energy and can be proved detrimental for the young generation. In this respect, they getting more involved in other activities in spite in physical activity.
To wrap up, it can be said that sports events on television influences the young generation to take part in outdoor activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, second, secondly, similarly, so, for example, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17174515235 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57525971805 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559556786704 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2339597107 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.722222222 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0555555556 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291441640734 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913634978664 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846724225612 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190898615866 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625893130808 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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