In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family.
Why might people want to do this?
Is it a positive or negative development?
There is no doubt that concerns of different people have changed a lot in these days. Many hobbies and interests have risen up. One of odd interests -that is becoming more popular nowadays- is searching into one's family tree and looking for relatives roots. Of course, there are many reasons and motivations behind this phenomenon. Although it may be as a sort of time wasting, I think it's essential to know your roots well.
Let's start talking about why people tend to search into their family trees. First of all, I think the most important cause is looking for hidden pride they don't know about. This is because we live in the era of social media and our world is like a small village. So, it would be an honor to discover that your roots is related to a previous king or a famous personality. For example, I have a friend who spent about two months searching into his roots until he discovered that he has common relatives with king Farouk who was the king of Egypt 70 years ago. Thanks to this, he became famous and got a promotion in his job. Secondly, Having common roots with important persons helps you to progress more and get promotions as I mentioned in the previous example.
About my opinion, I think it would be useful to know your history and how your previous family members lived. This might teach you that life is full of ups and downs. Therefore, you will be motivated to achieve more progress to make your family proud of you in the future. Another positive sign is being closer to more people around you if you discover that your family trees are related in some parts.
On the other hand, there are many drawbacks to this rising phenomenon. One of its disadvantages is it may create social divisions between people. This is because persons with roots related to kings or presidents could have sensation of grandiosity and superiority over the others. This will lead to social hazards on the long term. Moreover, it would be time wasting to spend months looking for a previous pride instead of making a new one for the coming generation.
To conclude, I agree that it's important to remember our family members and know them well. However, we should concentrate more on new achievements to make our sons proud of us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63909774436 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4226580811 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3222792005 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4782608696 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.347826087 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73913043478 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109314127843 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333622250556 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033991774352 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585389666403 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331888248557 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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