You have some repairs to do at home, but there is a restaurant next to your house. Write a letter to the restaurant manager and say:- What repairs are you going to do?- How will it affect the restaurant?- Provide a solution for the inconvenience.

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You have some repairs to do at home, but there is a restaurant next to your house. Write a letter to the restaurant manager and say:
- What repairs are you going to do?
- How will it affect the restaurant?
- Provide a solution for the inconvenience.

Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you about some repair works that are scheduled to happen tomorrow at my house. Let me briefly explain.

To elucidate I have recently purchased this house from a previous owner however I later found that there was a major issue with the underground sanitation pit located in my garden. Upon a detailed survey, it was concluded that the sanitation pit needed to be redesigned as there were multiple leakages from the pit causing hygiene issues and further allowing dirty water to get collected on the main road. Although I have instructed the workmen to carry the work quietly however there will be heavy noise as may need to dismantle the pit and reconstruct it. The noise and foul smell may affect the diners coming to your restaurant as they may not have an overwhelming dining experience.

Therefore, I would suggest closing your restaurant for a day since the reconstruction and cleaning of sanitation pit will be finished within a day.
I look forward to your cooperation in this matter.
Yours sincerely
Said

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you about some re...
^^^
Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ration in this matter. Yours sincerely Said
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, however, look, may, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92737430168 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7172440081 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675977653631 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6133119829 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172673770275 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06426795309 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625178456344 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100778237516 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534056886798 0.0580467560999 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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