You have recently used a moving company to move your household items to a new place and they have been damaged in transfer. Write a letter to the company’s manager and say (Egypt – Feb 2019)
– When and where did it take place?
– What is your complaint?
– Suggest a reasonable solution.
Dear Mr. Singh,
I recently hired the moving services of your company to transfer the household stuff from Malad to my new home in Andheri. I am writing this to express my disappointment regarding some items that have been damaged during the transfer.
The shifting was carried out in the morning on 15th of this month and all the items reached my new home on the same day itself. while doing an inspection of all the items, I found that the dressing table mirror was broken. Additionally, the TV had got scratches on the screen and it was not working when used in operation.
I was very disappointed by your services as the all items were packed by poor packing materials as a result of which caused severe loss to me.
Hence, it is my humble request to send one of the employees to investigate about the items damaged and bear the losses of items by replacing it new ones.
Yours sincerely,
Jeet Parikh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...hed my new home on the same day itself. while doing an inspection of all the items, I...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...employees to investigate about the items damaged and bear the losses of items by ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, regarding, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62195121951 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53869518261 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646341463415 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.2707576392 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.75 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215504557369 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866132254002 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683025177268 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119414841597 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104914431816 0.0580467560999 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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