Nowadays many people work part or full time from home. Some people say that working from home has many benefits while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
These days, numerous individuals are able to work part-time or fulltime from home. In regard to this, some people believe that they will obtain countless upsides by working from home while others disagree about it. In accordance with this statement, this essay will explain both points of view and also put forward my perspective in the following paragraphs.
According to this issue, I do appreciate to the statement which thought that working from home will render masses more advantages. these people believe that it, first and foremost, will render more opportunities to have a quality time with their family. Second but not less crucial, they do not have to spend more money for the commuting expense. Nevertheless, I tend to think that having a job which is outside of home will confer individuals more strengths rather than working from home.
Regarding to my argument above, there are various reasons of my perspective. It, first and foremost, will bestow all individuals more experiences instead of working from home since they used to face something different every day, thereby, they are capable of acquiring new experiences each day. Second but not less crucial, all individuals, moreover, is able to expand their societal life because they are going to meet new people. Last but not least, it is apparent that it is going to provide new information to the people who also desire to expand their knowledges, particularly, the knowledges of how manage business properly.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that working outside of home will give more positive experiences instead of working inside of home. Thus, in order to make us obtaining more positive impacts, we better have a job outside of our home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rengths rather than working from home. Regarding to my argument above, there ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, thus, while, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0701754386 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68574889984 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4087966632 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.153846154 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260578379338 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102713572961 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939281817423 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173694883479 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778490589844 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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