Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Explain why you cannot go anymore
Say who can go instead of you
Say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear john,
I am writing to tell you that I can not companion you for our planed arrangement. I have an unexpected visit from my parents for this weekend, they are coming from Shiraz. I wonder whether you know my mother's heart is seek and, they are going to take special examination which her doctor has prescribed. Although I am really looking forward to go with you, it is very important situation. They are not familiar with Tehran and this is my moral duty to serve them.
I know the tickets are not refundable and you spent much time to take them so, I am going to propose one of my nice friend instead of myself. I want to introduce you Lili. She is my colleague and i know her for four years. she is a big fan of sci-fi movie and she looked for partner to attend the movie. You surely ask yourself how is she like? so I have to say she is smart, nice and full of fun. In my opinion she is the best companionship for you. 09125355201 this is her number for your coordination. I have to express my apology again and I know you understand my situation.
I am looking forward to hear from you.
Yours sincerely
Amirreza
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 342, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to going', 'to gonna'.
Suggestion: to going; to gonna
...d. Although I am really looking forward to go with you, it is very important situatio...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...oduce you Lili. She is my colleague and i know her for four years. she is a big f...
^
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...olleague and i know her for four years. she is a big fan of sci-fi movie and she lo...
^^^
Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ou surely ask yourself how is she like? so I have to say she is smart, nice and fu...
^^
Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...and my situation. I am looking forward to hear from you. Yours sincerely Amirreza ...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ear from you. Yours sincerely Amirreza
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, really, so, you know, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 32.9175257732 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27570093458 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48526533854 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570093457944 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5316552568 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.1875 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.375 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5625 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269997556158 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967813813164 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661910351519 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175967273053 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387215860774 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.