Hello Mitch,
How is everything? I’m writing regarding our upcoming outing to the cinema, on a new Marvel film this Wednesday.
I know how long you’ve been planning this event and I really wanted to there with you, but, unfortunately, my situation has recently changed. Namely, a few hours ago I got an email from my aunt with invitation on her 50-th anniversary celebration, which will be held in her rural house. There are no excuses for me, because participation is obligatory. So now, I have to pack my stuff and to buy a ticket on today's evening train to her village.
However, I don't want you to miss the film because of me and I asked our common friend Marie to go with you instead. I chose her, as she also likes all Marvel movies, the same as we do. Moreover, she has many fresh comics about super-heroes in her house, so she might show them to you after the cinema. In this respect, I think, she is the best person (after me), with whom you can not only watch the film, but also you have many things to discuss afterwards.
In any case, I want to say sorry for the inconvenience because of such last-minute changes and I hope you'll have fun with Marie.
Regards,
Tina
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...have fun with Marie. Regards, Tina
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, really, regarding, so, i think, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53669724771 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58702989477 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665137614679 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7462636444 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9090909091 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181207977737 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578747042883 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862081679838 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079993888089 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875839093498 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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