A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets lots of exercise, and avoid stress.
What do people do to stay healthy in your country?
Nowadays people are such busy in their routines, so that they forget to pay attention towards their health. Many are suffered from stressful life due to excessive work load in the office. A person often called physically fit when he/she does regular exercise, take good diet in meal and avoid stress.
In India, Humans are so conscious for their health along with routines. Most of them are doing job, although they care for health by doing exercise daily. People wake up early morning and go outside or in the garden for morning walk & jogging. Especially in winter season, the chilled atmosphere lead to be lazy but they are so excited to do jogging in the garden. In the latest survey carried out by medical university students, stated that the rate of heart attack and increasing the cholesterol seems to be reduced in people who are doing jogging in the morning, the reason behind is, the circulation of blood getting fast when the human walk and take breathe in the morning fresh air.
Most of the young people between age of 22 to 36 are prefer to do hard work outs in the gym. They believe in the making of body shape and muscles which are equal important for physical fitness. Apart from these people, old age people would also like to do light exercise, for example meditation and walking in the garden.
Moreover, Healthy diet also play vital role for maintaining good health. Presently, junk foods like pizza and burgers are trending and commonly available at the food outlet in India. Especially younger are getting habitat from junk food along with cold drinks which are adversely affect the body. Cold drinks containing carbohydrates which lead to increasing the obesity and laziness in the body. On the other side the people are so occupied in the office work load such that they are frequently getting panic until finishing of work. This tends to increase the stress level and affect to the body. By avoiding such situations they do meditation daily for peace of mind.
Hence, looking to the present scenario, it seems that everyone is busy with their life, although it is to be necessary to concentrate on health by doing the exercise and taking healthy diet. Last but not least the health is our wealth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, moreover, so, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78961038961 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33503633701 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550649350649 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7645869024 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231035062345 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629316386816 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572661154613 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125103911896 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173547344565 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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