You are a member of an organization which meets regularly at particular restaurant the most recent meal you had that was not satisfactory, and you were very disappointed with the quality of food and behavior of staff.
Write a letter to a manager of the restaurant. Explain what was wrong with the meal and service and suggest what he/she should do to ensure that you and your group returned to the restaurant.
Begin your letter as follows,
Dear Sir/Madam,
Dear sir/Madam,
Last Sunday I came with organization’s people with whom I attached or say member of it to your restaurant for meal. Since last two years we had come to this place for get to gather which arranged every two months. Though this restaurant is very well known for its food quality, management and humble staff but this time we are very disappointed with food quality and staff behavior of your restaurant.
Let’s tell you from the beginning, we about 20 people came for the meal around 1’o clock. Well its recess time for the people who works in offices, so there were many other people. We were waited for 20 minutes for our turn; lastly we got our table and settled. We had chosen our meal and ordered accordingly. Though we got our order in very less time and started to eat our meal, but while I took my first bite I felt it smelled very badly and found it is not fresh. I called manager and told him about it but he was not cooperating with us and makes the argument. But he was not responding properly and also staff of your restaurant. At last we left restaurant without taking our meal.
That’s why I need to write this letter to you about this incidence because you have right to know. To run restaurant you have to understand customers’ need and what kind of services they should wanted. I am writing this with hope that after receiving this letter you must try to improve services as well as staff of your restaurant. I am eager to come again at your restaurant.
Thanks,
Yours Faithfully,
Avani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 359, Rule ID: EAGER_TO[1]
Message: With 'eager to', use the base form of the verb: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...staff of your restaurant. I am eager to come again at your restaurant. Thanks, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, lastly, so, well, while, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 5.05154639175 297% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 278.0 206.0 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64028776978 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60670277023 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561151079137 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 385.2 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1904399558 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.625 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270580054237 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843937640752 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596085031745 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18631512558 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374016251352 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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