You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Every country should have a free health service, even if thismeans that the latest medical treatments may not be availablethrough the service because they are too expensive.To | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Every country should have a free health service, even if this
means that the latest medical treatments may not be available
through the service because they are too expensive.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your
own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.

<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 15pt 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: normal; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Access to a reliable and good quality health
service is important for the people of any country. Developments in medical
treatment and medical technology over Iho last few decades have seen the costs
of health care rise making it unaffordable to many people in the community.
There are two reasons why a free health service should be available to all,
namely the high cost of treatment and the government's duty to its people. I<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 15pt 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: normal; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Firstly, without government provision of free
health care, the loss advantaged members of the community, such as the
unemployed and the aged, would not be able to afford medical treatment. This
situation would result in great suffering and further entrench the
disadvantaged status of these groups. Secondly, the purpose of any government
is to ensure the wellbeing of its people. By providing a free health care
service, the government would be directly attending to this duty.<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 15pt 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: normal; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">The health care service should be organised in
a way that caters for the needs of the population as a whole. This means that
the government must prioritise medical services. For example, there could be provision
for free access to consultation with doctors as well as free access to general
hospital care.<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 15pt 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: normal; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">On the other hand, free access to more
expensive and specialised treatments may need to have some restrictions due to
the high costs involved.<p class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 15pt 0in 0.0001pt; line-height: normal; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">In conclusion, free health care of a good overall quality is an important service for a government to provide because it has a duty to ensure that alt people in the community aro taken care of,

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Line 8, column 43, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
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Suggestion: , ...eople in the community aro taken care of, ^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3877.0 1615.20841683 240% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 9.38740920097 5.12529762239 183% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 12.6419105995 2.80592935109 451% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.418886198547 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 978.3 506.74238477 193% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.4 1.60771543086 149% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 519.039069392 49.4020404114 1051% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 430.777777778 106.682146367 404% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.8888888889 20.7667163134 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.2222222222 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0540434871019 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537299427509 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470288690619 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0451046337799 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479182218628 0.056905535591 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.7 13.0946893788 349% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -41.88 50.2224549098 -83% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.3 11.3001002004 268% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 38.07 12.4159519038 307% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.5 9.78957915832 230% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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