Write a letter to a manager whose company is constructing their new office next to your
apartment.
- Introduce yourself
- Describe problems you are facing because of this
- Suggest solutions
Dear sir,
My name is ibekwe keylaz and i reside in kwale street where your company is building her new office complex and we are having some issues due to the constructions going on.
Let me explain my situation in detail, presently, we are facing two major problems. Firstly, the drainage channels are blocked with concretes and granites used for the construction process. Therefore, we are experiencing heavy flooding which has affected my agricultural products. Secondly, the construction workers are fond of making too much noise at night. They chant and play loud music and as a result i am having difficulty in sleeping at night.
Could you caution your workers to reduce noise and lower the volume of their sub-woofer. Furthermore, instruct them to clear the drainage channel so to ease easy flow of water in the drainage channels. If these are done, it will be useful to me and the resident of kwale street.
Thanks for your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Xyx sim.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, My name is ibekwe keylaz and i reside in...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r sir, My name is ibekwe keylaz and i reside in kwale street where your compa...
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Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... process. Therefore, we are experiencing heavy flooding which has affected my agr...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ant and play loud music and as a result i am having difficulty in sleeping at nig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02923976608 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76664435511 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.713450292398 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1247255985 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6666666667 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0900590526989 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0267769060889 0.0766984524023 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313212032538 0.0603063233224 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0551903547442 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266593304151 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.