You stayed at a hotel last week.After you got home you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager, and explain what happened. Describe the watch, and ask them to help you find it.

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You stayed at a hotel last week.After you got home you realized that you had left your watch behind. Write a letter to the hotel manager, and explain what happened. Describe the watch, and ask them to help you find it.

Dear sir,
I recently lodged at your hotel and i stayed in room number 20. Unfortunately, i forgot my watch in the hotel room which i believe i left on top of the bed.
Let me explain my situation in detail, on that fateful day, i received a distress call from my office line so in had to hurriedly packaged my luggage in my bag and left. Therefore, i forget the watch in the process.

The watch is a swiss brand which has a chartreuse coloured strap and horse- blood colored metal buckle. Furthermore,it has a chronograph.

Could you please help me find the watch. If found, please kindly give it to the receptionist so that when i come back for the conference i will pick it up from her.

Thanks for your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Ade hki

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 629.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 138.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55797101449 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80352382756 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673913043478 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 185.4 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.9787727712 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.9 112.824112599 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.8 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212395495291 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805388182072 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853332402904 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908475492989 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519132659124 0.0819641961636 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.2329268293 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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