In towns and cities, large shopping malls should replace the small local shops. Do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is that large shopping malls should replace the small shops in the market. There is widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of problems among buyers and sellers. In my opinion, this apprehension is warranted and merits serious consideration.
There are numerous arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that it is easy to approach a small shop for shopping. Not only these shops reduce wastage of time for shopping, but also helps in earning for a number of sole traders, which is not possible in large shopping centers. Needless to say, all these merits stand small shops in good stead, as far as wastage of time and employment of people is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that small shops are cost effective. Besides, due to very small expenses on the sale of products, it ultimately reduces the product price. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of the small shops.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits of small shops are indeed too great to ignore
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...all shops are indeed too great to ignore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 1207.87684729 77% => OK
No of words: 194.0 242.827586207 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77319587629 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.92707691288 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51660443977 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 379.143842365 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3495356972 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1818181818 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 20.9669160288 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.25397266985 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226873732568 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827306409027 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838144392016 0.071462118173 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130697588194 0.151781067708 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389578266411 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 200 words wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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