You are planning to go on a holiday in another country. Write a letter to your friend asking him/her to join. Include following in your letter.
• Why you need a holiday.
• Your holiday plans.
• Why you need your friend to join with you.
Dear Glinka,
How are you? It's been a long time since we see each other. I hope all is well. you be glad to hear that I'll be coming to Dubai for a short vacation to escape from the hustle and bustle of my work. I hope that you could join me exploring the city as I don't know anyone there except you.
I've searched for nice places to visit like Burj Khalifa. I wanted to witness the famous dancing fountain in front of the skyscraper. I would also love to do bar hopping and I think that there are plenty of beach bars that we could enjoy. Actually Gina recently visited there and told me about different shopping centres which offers affordable prices, so I think we can look around. I remember we always do shopping together and I would love to buy stuffs before the school year starts.
I'll be arriving next month, I hope that you could ask permission from your manager a short leave so we can spend time together. I don't mind if you suggest more wonderful places that we could go.
Send me back as soon as you received my letter.
Regards,
Jessica
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Glinka, How are you? Its been a long time since ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
... we see each other. I hope all is well. you be glad to hear that Ill be coming to D...
^^^
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...u could join me exploring the city as I dont know anyone there except you. Ive s...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... dont know anyone there except you. Ive searched for nice places to visit like ...
^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...uffs before the school year starts. Ill be arriving next month, I hope that you...
^^^
Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... leave so we can spend time together. I dont mind if you suggest more wonderful plac...
^^^^
Line 11, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... as you received my letter. Regards, Jessica
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, look, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38693467337 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15706115009 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64824120603 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3153135248 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1538461538 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165560210301 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547306521739 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682650985571 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117202762221 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680620241393 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.