Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.
Parenting is an art every individual needs to learn eventually. Many learn it by reading the books on being good parents, some witness caring parenting examples in their families or friend circle, while many develop their own skills while upbringing their children.
Being taught about parenting at a school level is a very good idea. During school times teenagers are usually struggling with issues of growing up, start realising the presence of generation gap, have complains from their parents, disappointments in the way are treated or find their parents are nagging or being too nosy. They start develop the need to fit in and may succumb to the peer pressure.
During this growing up stage, if the schools can help children understand and imbibe in their young minds that good parents always think in their best interests. They try their best to give them a comfortable lifestyle or highlight the sacrifices that the parents make, or the responsiblity of raising a child with sound morals lies with the parents. Schools should also preach that good parents keep their kids discplined as it is very important aspect in every area of life. Educational institues should also impress on kids that great parents teach their kids to value their time, the lessons on never giving up and fighting back. so while in school the children may fail at a test or be bullied they know how to fight back.
Teaching parenting values at school levels can help them understand their parents better and value their lessons. It also might reduce the number of incidents where in kids commit crime. These childs when they grow they can become very caring and nuturing parents.
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- You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter•introduce yourself•explain what is wrong with the 56
- Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. 73
- You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.Write a letter to your landlord. In your letterintroduce yourselfexplain what is wrong with the furnit 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 634, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...s on never giving up and fighting back. so while in school the children may fail a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41296455821 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5735768528 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.615384615 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.84615384615 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256364166122 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103588080105 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799749062619 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169091763149 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590037152614 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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