Write a letter to the local planning committee. A new swimming pool is about to be built in your town, the local planning committee wants all residents to let them know where to place the pool - in the centre of town or just outside the town. Write a letter describing the importance of the pool, the location you prefer and why, explain why the other location isn’t suitable.
Dear sir,
I am Harry, a local resident of Warwick town. Through a local newspaper article, I got to know about the swimming pool to be built in our town. First of all, on behalf of all the residents, I am thankful to you for asking our opinion for the location of pool. I am writing this letter to give my opinion about the same.
swimming pool was the most required and lacked facility of our town, which you are going to fulfill soon. Summer vacations are approaching and we are glad that this summer our kids will have their own swimming pool, unlike previously they had to visit their friend's or relative's house to practice swimming. This swimming pool will be of great importance, as we can practice swimming there and spend our spare time doing something adventurous.
As per my opinion, it should be built in the middle of town because it will be easily reachable hence more utilized. Mothers or grand parents could easily drop their kids for swimming class otherwise they have to be dependent on fathers to drive them there. Also if the swimming pool is in the center of town it will bring more income to the town as compared to outside town. On the other side, if swimming pool is built outside town it will not be of much benefit to us. As it will be tough for kids to commute there daily. It will also not add to the economic income of our state.
I hope you will consider my suggestion seriously and choose center of town as final location for swimming pool.
your sincerely
Harry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear sir, I am Harry, a local resident of Warwick ...
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Suggestion: Swimming
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...pendent on fathers to drive them there. Also if the swimming pool is in the center o...
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Suggestion:
...mming pool is built outside town it will not be of much benefit to us. As it will...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to center'
Suggestion: to center
...ider my suggestion seriously and choose center of town as final location for swimming ...
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Suggestion: Your
...as final location for swimming pool. your sincerely Harry
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 937.175257732 133% => OK
No of words: 274.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55109489051 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30780769216 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521897810219 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6930126992 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1333333333 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335363359943 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127832588413 0.0766984524023 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967277421433 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20595506112 0.12726935374 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822244085889 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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