A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past.
Write a reply to your friend. In your letter:
1. tell your friend you understand the problem
2. explain what happened to you in the past
3. Suggest possible solutions to the problem.
Dear John,
I am very happy to receive a letter from you after a long time and glad that you give me an opportunity to help you out in your present situation in office meeting. I had similar problem, when I was supposed to give presentation in front of top management after spending just 1 week in the new office.
On my 8th day of the new office, I had to give a report on product sales strategy for next quarter. As I was new in this region, I had no clue about the market scenario. I had only 14 hours to share my report with the top management. I must confess that it was tough day for me.
I called a meeting with my colleagues and asked them to share their knowledge about the recent market. We used the most efficient method called “QC Tool” to sort out all our ideas. Although it seems very easy, we put a lot of efforts on that day. One more advice is that please listen to each and every participant of the meeting. This is a key to make a concrete and precise plan.
Hope all my experiences will have you in resolving your current problem. Let me know you presentation status after end of the day.
Regards,
Bibhu Kalita
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| 2019-10-13 | abrashee | 73 | view |
| 2019-06-06 | paras_vadaliya | 73 | view |
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| 2018-12-08 | haireus3010 | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...onfess that it was tough day for me. I called a meeting with my colleagues and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32568807339 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43716161846 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614678899083 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1982609926 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3571428571 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 4.34317383033 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210450845973 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594102616071 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783779224594 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137648790108 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977318466464 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.