what are the most important characteristics in a teacher ,
When i was to school , i have a great teacher named Mona. she taught us french languages. Although , it was extremely difficult , she push us to lean it.Mona possess many characteristics which are commended to teach and grow up children. At first , she is well -educated when she comes over her studies in university , she get up a master degree , She is very patient, reviewed lessons , in addition , she is easy going , and get on with us and our family.
Dislike other teacher , she explains lessons used variety materials such as game , quiz , example from our lives. Moreover, She is very helpful, providing us advice concerning learning and study . In addition, she is a kind person whom persues poor studies to go on and give them private lessons without get paid and help then to obtain schoolarship and look after student with disabilites and get dificulty in learning. at the end , she is hardworking , love her job.
In my views, education is not the most important characteristics in teacher but he must be also heplful, patient , friendly , kindly and thoughtful person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, so, then, well, as to, in addition, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 1977.66487455 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 181.0 407.700716846 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90607734807 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.48103885553 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82418534357 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 212.727598566 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690607734807 0.524837075471 132% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 618.680645161 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6085318599 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 5.45110844103 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 5.5376344086 506% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114691916686 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559343745582 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921231106689 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124473798687 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124622532942 0.0645574589148 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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