The cost of international travel is decreasing and tourism is growing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism activity in different countries?
Over the past few decades owing to the advancement of technology tourism in various nations are flourishing. Nowadays, it is not a great deal to travel throughout the world since the travelling cost are minimizing to high extent than ever before. In the given scenario, it is perceived that since it is not expensive to travel the places of our choices this has assisted in thriving tourism. Meanwhile, undoubtedly I agree to this point to great extent however the downsides that tourism might carry out should not be overlooked. I feel this ways for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, one of the major aspect that the tourism has brought is promotion of local products. To be more precise, when a person travel to foreign land then they get to know about the local production produced out there. Indeed, once they are mindful of the products and initiate to utilize they are suceptible to share the review to their friends living overseas. This way we can export goods to other nation and eventually this aids in elevating nation’s economy. To exemplify, dhaka is a local product of Nepal and there is an evidence that dhaka are exported to foreign land more than they used to be when the international travel are restricted. Thus, travelling has proved to be fruitful for the economic development of any nation.
The above stated statement sounds reasonable yet the outcomes that the tourism might enter to homeland should not be ignored. Needless to say, when travellers spend time in foreign land they get aware of foreign culture. Likewise, when they get habituated to these tradition they tend to forget the own culture. Furthermore, they follow and spread foreign tradition to others. This results in loss of identification of person. To cite an example, In Nepal the local dress called guinyo choli, daura sulwar are in a state of extinction as people are allure to foreign culture and tradition. The day is not so far that people utterly forgetting about nation’s culture and tradition. Therefore, tourism might be prove to be bad fortune in some way.
All things considered, despite having multitude of benefit tourism has its downsides too. Hence, everyone should learn to embrace tourism positively remaining in our own ground.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, likewise, look, so, then, therefore, thus, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1919.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01044386423 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68440326728 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553524804178 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 603.9 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3813259948 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.380952381 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2380952381 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2380952381 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146716759714 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449987108769 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404447188093 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100388274595 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384341988826 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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