The government can take a variety of actions to help protect the environment. Which one of the following do you think is the most important for the nation's government to take to protect the environment?
1. Found research to develop environmentally friendly energy sources such as solar and wind energy.
2. Preserve the natural places like forests and protect that live there.
3. Enforce laws to prevent the pollution of air and water by large companies.
The pollution is the worst problem for ours' era, and there are several things which cause it such as factories wastes, carbon dioxide and gas consuming, all of these effect environments badly.So, these impacts had been controlled by government.
First of all, although there are several responsible people or things, the government have to has the highest responsibilities.So, especially federal government have to solve quickly and effectively.If it do not interested in truly there would be bad environments pollution like river, sea or air pollutions.And there are enough options for solving that problems, and it must choose the best technique.
Also, therefore there are other options the peak option is the seeking good energy sources such like solar and wind energy.And, may be there would be another options but the top approach is our method.Because, there are many effective, productive and friendly resources everywhere, and these are used as soon as possible by people where live near them.
Furthermore, searching the sources should be economic, if there are big consuming money that would be the problem for government, because it has not much enough budget for explorations.Ohter methods increase budget outcomes.And, the solar energy sources as like as wind energy sources would be found everywhere in the world.
In my opinion, taking account of all above's reasons, investigations of good energy sources the peak technique among others.And if there would not be not enough these type of energy sources, the government should concentrate other types.Because our world it important for us and for our next generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 52.1666666667 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 256.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4296875 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1433737194 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5703125 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.1344086022 253% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.3526503627 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 278.0 100.406767564 277% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.2 20.6045352989 248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.2 5.45110844103 334% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0930165586547 0.236089414692 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547849896231 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371135662866 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0547849896231 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371135662866 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.7 11.7677419355 252% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 58.1214874552 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 10.1575268817 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 10.9000537634 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 10.002688172 295% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.0537634409 223% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.247311828 293% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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