When you face difficult problems in life,what do you feel is the best way to solve them?
Challenges and difficulties are an inevitable part of life. All people without exception have and will face them somewhere in their lives. Hence, it is not how small or how big the problem is that is important, but it is how and whether we solve that problem that counts more. If I face one, I definitely prefer seeking advice from an elderly mostly because of two significant reasons.
First of all, those who have the experience know what works and does not. They guide you through the shortest and most effective way to solve a problem. My personal experience is a good illustration of this. Two years ago when I was applying for the Fulbright scholarship for my masters degree, I came to realize that I had to had a TEOFL score as part of the requirement. Since I had no clue of such a requirement, I had not bothered taking the test in advance. However, my brother who had taken the test several times, guided me through the quickest and efficient method to study for it. He told me about how I needed to focus on the speaking and writing sections first as they were easier to improve in a limited time. As a result, a month later I scored 84 which is acceptable for the scholarship I am applying.
Secondly, experienced people can tell us what ways does not work. They provide us with a sense of predictability to prepare ourselves to the challenge. I remember that a friend of mine had to start a restaurant business in the heart of the city. While he was well educated and interested about the idea, had no prior experience of such work. I pushed him to consult someone experienced to lessen any risk ahead, but he did not. He even refused to discuss the issue with the nieboring restaurants reasoning that he knows everything already. Now, he does have a restaurant, but it is all down. No customers, no sells and so no income.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50598802395 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70809831411 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580838323353 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8137550454 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.25 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122397771835 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333004663842 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592479909954 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797742002117 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452885553356 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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