It is necessary for parents to attend parenting training to bring their children up.Do you agree or disagree?
Some people argued that bringing children up course is becoming necessary for parents in today's society. For me, i agreed with this idea because of several reasons.
Firstly, it is true that today offsprings are lacking of their parental care. To clarify, according to a research conducted by A university, the time that parents spent on taking care their kids just is equal one-third their working time. Therefore, parents should be trained how to balance between their family and work especially their children. In addition, those training course might teach them the good way to educate their offspring from a child. For example, parents could instruct kids how to read and learn from books,which may lead their children form a reading habit. As a result, they would gain many benefits in the future because books are unlimited valuable.
In conclusion, I completely agreed with this idea that training course for parents to bring up their kid is significant via several above factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, third, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 162.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11728395062 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5234836678 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679012345679 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8440390475 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1111111111 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409748659259 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165116085682 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10360362229 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295390916803 0.151304729494 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225894540872 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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