Some people think that public health within a country can be improved by government making laws regarding nutritious food. Others, however, think that health is a matter of personal choice and responsibility.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Public health is one of the significant difficulties that government face with them in the modern time. Most of the people believe in that public health could be rejuvenated by some rules which are imposed on the food industry by authorities, while, the others persist in health conscious is a particular issue which is related to own people. In the following, both views will be debated and it is proved that a high level of health public could be obtained by people.
To the beginning, the government could play a major role to boost the level of public health. This can be operated by a set of series of rules to control people’s food habitation. In fact, this condition could control factors of a healthy diet. In addition, the government could make an unhealthy habit cut by using social media to recommend people. It means, by spreading advertisements and announcements went viral through the internet and television to improve people’s conscious about unhealthy diet. In consequence, these solutions make it clear that how the country’s authorities should be effective to increase community health of one nation.
The government has a huge effect on human health. However, it would be risen if people never get involved with it. People not only must be aware of their health but also should make it improve. Because of this, there is a range of activities that could be done by people to rise public health. Firstly, people must consider their diet by using exceed vegetable instead of oily and processed food. Furthermore, they must have a routine schedule to allocate their time to have some exercise to prevent obesity. Because of this, they may never have a heart attack. These examples one of the dozens of actions done to have ample public health.
To conclude, this essay discussed separately how the government and individuals have a duty to boost public health. Besides, from my point of view people’s roles outweigh than the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01519756839 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81386744231 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528875379939 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8238031513 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8421052632 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3157894737 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295611825818 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948698415302 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541157863581 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185731006051 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366470830302 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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