You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news.
Write to your friend. In the letter:
• Describe the house.
• Describe the neighbourhood.
• Invite your friend to come and see the house.
Hi Shahla,
It has been a while since I have seen you. Hope you’re doing great. I am writing you to inform about a great news that I have recently bought a new house and have moved in just a few days ago.
It is a mid-sized duplex house with 5 bedrooms and an attached bathroom with every room. There is also a servant room in the back yard. The exterior of the house is covered with antique red bricks which give it a sophisticated look and attractive at the same time.
The Neighbourhood is one of the best part about the house as it is covered with trees and roads have speed limit signs everywhere which makes it very safe for running or an evening walk in free time. The “no horn” signs everywhere on roads also contribute towards the calamity of the area.
The last time we met was a few months ago and I would love to have you around for next weekend, we can watch movie together at my new place and play some other games like chess for fun and you can see my new house too this way.
Your Friend
Haider Janjua
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'great news'.
Suggestion: great news
...great. I am writing you to inform about a great news that I have recently bought a new house...
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Line 4, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...athroom with every room. There is also a servant room in the back yard. The exter...
^^
Line 6, column 201, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...unning or an evening walk in free time. The 'no horn' signs everywhere on...
^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...te towards the calamity of the area. The last time we met was a few months ago a...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30303030303 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2368663492 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646464646465 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4468486636 44.8134815571 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165746446438 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072309907021 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909766709695 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703821682923 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654737796528 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.73 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.