1. Gambling is an activity which causes more harm than good and so should be made illegal in all countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree, give reasons and examples to support your response.
Gambling is considered as one of the easiest and quickest way to earn more money in life. It gives more happiness as one starts to understand the way to gamble and starts to win. While it is a common fact that gambling is illegal across different countries, there are few countries that officially allow gambling and, in many countries, it is happening underground. This essay is about the facts to agree that gambling across all countries should be made illegal.
Gambling is allowed in many developed countries like USA,Australia,Singapore,Malaysia and in developing countries like Thailand, India. There are many a reason that gambling being allowed in these countries but one of the most important reason is recreation. Also, winning is a pride for all the participants in gambling and they take away a good amount of money than they spent in it. Assume if a person spent $1 in his bet of gambling and won $5, the winning money was a contribution by its losers. Hence for losers it becomes an addiction until they win once in gambling. But that does not mean a winner is always winner, he may lose one day. The sad truth unknown to gamblers is, the organiser of this gambling are the real winners as they get a percentage of penny in each game of gambling, regardless of the winner or losers, the organiser benefits every time when a game is on.
Gambling though a recreation it makes one to get attracted towards other habits like smoking drugs, alcohol consumption etc., as the other participants do this while they gamble. It is a triggering part to end up with unwanted addiction that may cause harm to ones’ health. Hence, it should be banned by all nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 289.0 242.827586207 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78200692042 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07891452065 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553633217993 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.501010295 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7142857143 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 7.25397266985 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198465644459 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720944395802 0.0925447433944 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053326436194 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136260671258 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495283444288 0.0609392437508 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.5310837438 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.32886699507 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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