Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Although happiness is not related to any age but it has always been a prominent topic of argument that which period in human life cycle is better and more happier. I believe a person is more happy in his teenage when compared to adulthood and I will try to prove my views through this essay.
teenagers have more freedom in respect to choose or focus on their likings or disliking on any aspect of life, it may be related to studies, carrier, clothes or even irrelevant stuffs. they are in their learning and blooming stage and hence can do more practical or experiments to bring out the true identity and to make futuristic goals which results in happiness. Also they have all the time to spend in a fruitful way i.e. making new friends, enjoy quality time with family and togetherness, exploring better opportunities along with having fun. Last but not the least they are not overburdened with many responsibilities and even are not supposed to answer anyone. only the weaker side seems to be lack of money which can be tackled with some preliminary jobs and be wisely handled without issues.
on the other hand adulthood comes with lot of responsibilities at the first state itself. people are often devoted to one or another thing as per their financial situations or conditions. Though adulthood comes with an advantage of jobs and established carriers but that is not enough to buy happiness. As mostly adults are under the burden of various kinds of loans may be education or house or family, which hinders the happiness. on top of it today's world is full of stress and health related problems due to kind of jobs people pursue which plays a vital role in impacting enjoyment and fun. Being dis-satisfied with their performances at jobs or at home and all the aggressive attitude worsen the fun and happiness in life to larger extent.
To conclude, as teenagers are full with more energy and positive attitude hence that is the best and happiest time in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...eriod in human life cycle is better and more happier. I believe a person is more happy in hi...
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Suggestion: Teenagers
...o prove my views through this essay. teenagers have more freedom in respect to choose ...
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Suggestion: They
...ier, clothes or even irrelevant stuffs. they are in their learning and blooming stag...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...istic goals which results in happiness. Also they have all the time to spend in a fr...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a fruitful way" with adverb for "fruitful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s. Also they have all the time to spend in a fruitful way i.e. making new friends, enjoy quality ...
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Suggestion: On
...nd be wisely handled without issues. on the other hand adulthood comes with lot...
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...onsibilities at the first state itself. people are often devoted to one or another thi...
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...r family, which hinders the happiness. on top of it todays world is full of stres...
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... the best and happiest time in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, another thing, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77259475219 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65413427824 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574344023324 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.972861875 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.928571429 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138293547637 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478061978773 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331134854923 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937542371282 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280231815041 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.