Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations, while others believe they should get one long vacation. Give the advantages of both and express your own point of view.
Vacations are the most awaited and enjoyable period of school life. These days students plan well in advance the activities, they are going to do during vacations. some people think that there should be many short-term vacations, while other thinks that there should be only one long-term vacation and I agree with the later group of people.
To begin with, one long vacation means, there are not multiple breaks from school thus no distraction from studies more than once. Moreover I believe that long vacations could be spent more appropriately then short vacations. In long vacations, students could join a skill development programs such as swimming or learning foreign language, which is not possible in short-duration vacations. For example, I joined advanced mathematics course during my long holidays that further helped me to score good marks in my school exams.
However, there are some advantages of short-duration vacations. The main advantage of such holiday pattern is less gap in studies as compared to long holidays. Also the students are aware that their school will start soon, they are well prepared and spent their vacations in a balanced way unlike long vacations, when students forget to do studies considering the long days for school restart.
In my opinion, one long holiday is beneficial for all of us, whether students, parents, teachers or school. one long holiday means more family time thus many days to spent quality time together. Furthermore, one holiday during a session means only one time distraction or gap from school studies unlike multiple small holidays.
To sum up, holidays are meant for refreshments and in my opinion long holidays give us better opportunities to spent them decently either with families or learning new skill in comparison to short vacations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, in short, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2439862543 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70712742024 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539518900344 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7223413014 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273679222273 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100127352979 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680842998444 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153031343267 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642923106713 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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