At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
In some nations, the proportion of young adults is higher than the older one. As far as I know, the advantages are highly bigger.
To begin with, a huge number of young population always leads to surplus labor systems. Thus helping to increase the economy of the nation, which make the country to be ranked on the top list. Therefore, more and more opportunities of jobs would come from the outside, supporting the industries especially in technology and logistics. According to a research study from the economist magazine, there are more investments of developed countries on the other ones having adequate and skillful labors. Another advantage is that the consumption market is becoming bigger and stricter, hence leading to the improvement of the products and the citizen's living standard would grow significantly.
A glance at the high number of old people, for instance Japan or Korea, show thatvthe governments are spending such a great amount of money on nursing home, goods for the old and the foreign labors. It could be considered as a challenge to solve immigrants and job problems. As a result, the economy of the country would slow down. In order to solve this, the government need to bring in some laws to increase the birth rate, reducing the work pressure and especially, every single citizen should be aware of the drawback of high percentage of the old in the population.
In conclusion, the high age phenomenon is always not to be the trend and the governments have to reduce it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1256.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94488188976 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77172065058 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602362204724 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5431939303 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.666666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147629998894 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493603624006 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513684698767 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775805659833 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463492038054 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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