Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.
What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
Nowadays, large number of universities offer both technical and non technical course through out the world. It is a debatable issue that whether education at university level should be work-oriented or general studies. In my opinion, it should provide education needed in the workplace for the betterment of the students.
To start with, In this competitive world, work-oriented courses has become a necessity because of increase population and decreased number of jobs. It would be definitely better if universities offer education which the employer demands. On the other side, if university education would be limited to general knowledge than graduates had to enroll explicitly for professional training or had to pursue post-graduate courses in order to grab a job, hence it would be extremely expensive. In short, what is the use of education, which do not provide skills and knowledge to work and earn your living.
Also , students enroll themselves in university education to gain professional knowledge so as to combat the unemployment and other critical issues of the life. As they already gained the basic education at school level, learning again the similar courses at university level would not be a wise decision. Moreover, it would be useless to spent three to four years for college studies, instead it would be more beneficial to join some professional training or internship to make ourselves skillful and efficient.
In conclusion, Universities are the most responsible institutions of the society, which should prepare students as competent for the job-world. Therefore in my opinion, the courses learned by graduates at the college should be completely work-oriented.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion, in short, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 937.175257732 153% => OK
No of words: 263.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45627376426 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11570702732 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566539923954 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 290.88556701 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.0986572848 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.583333333 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 4.34317383033 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259943110058 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101210368291 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437441025455 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169013643996 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216144367282 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 8.37731958763 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 70.7449484536 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 8.71597938144 165% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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